【2022年9月入会】急に仕事で英語を使う必要がでてきました！込み入った会話になると難しさを感じます。

体験レッスンの内容を拝見させていただきました。直近の課題として語彙を上げさせていただきます。

語彙力につきましては、適切な単語選び及び自然な言い回しを用いることが課題です。すでに問題なく相手に伝わる語彙力をお持ちですが、さらに自然な言い回しを身につけることで、相手により伝わりやすくなったり、またネイティブ話者からHitoshi様の英語力の高さをより認知されるきっかけになるでしょう。

以下抜粋例です。

First of all, the pros of working remotely is that employees can choose where to work. This discretion is very attractive to them. In addition, they don’t have to consume the time to go (to the) office. It means that they can avoid the risks to Covid 19. On the other hand, the cons of it is that sometimes it’s hard to communicate because of remote session. It’s not only because trouble with device but also it’s sometimes hard to deliver and accept the information lively. And pros of working in an office is indoubtedly easy to communicate with colleagues and clients. The cons is more inefficient than working remotely. 

REVISED

First of all, the pros of working remotely is that employees can choose where to work.  This discretion is very attractive to them. In addition, they don’t have to spend time commuting to work.  It means that they can avoid the risks of contracting Covid 19. On the other hand, the cons of it is that sometimes it’s hard to communicate because it’s done remotely.  It’s not only because of trouble with the device but also it might sometimes be misunderstood because we cannot see the person’s vibe, facial expression, body language, and gestures. . And pros of working in an office is that it is undoubtedly easy to communicate with colleagues and clients. The cons is that it is more inefficient than working remotely in terms of time management.